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Unbroken Wings
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 01:00:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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These wings were once broken
These eyes once poured tears
Now my tears have dried
and my wings have mended.
Found love inthe instant I spoke
found love in anothers arms
who doesn't use silly charms
who held me as my heart broke
My heart broke the chains
of the many years of pains
now its just you and I
no reasons to ask why
you complete me honestly
are we going to last???
I do not know
but my wings have mened
and your the wind that makes me soar,
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Re: Unbroken Wings
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by pixie on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 01:04:06 PM AEST
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writing is such a great release of harboured feelings, a good write, filled with emotions,
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Re: Unbroken Wings
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by Justintears on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 06:51:58 PM AEST
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| heart felt and uplifting to the last line. Words of hopes that keep me hoping. |
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Re: Unbroken Wings
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 04:47:54 PM AEST
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Your terminology was great. Keep soaring, this poem was wonderful, and I'm so glad your wings are no longer broken.
Loved the thoughts and the flow.
Keep up the good fight, and remember always to have the wind at your back.........and soar even more!
Warm love
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