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Lover's heart
Contributed by
toserious2
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Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 01:38:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Vision's fantasy is a lover's heart.
So cool and touchy at every thought,
Lost, like in poet's muse
Obsessive!giddy!dreamy!cute!
An abode of grace in restless sea,
With youthful waves and deep dreams,
How vast is sky in its land!
Colourless!forlorn!light!bright!
Never alone always in chat.
In safe mode,speaking sad,
Stern enough against some rootless wind
Cornered!Depressed!worried!wild!
A book of feelings with blank pages;
Pathless stream or darkful lakes.
All in all,one is whole;
"In Godless passion with divine support."
Copyright ©
toserious2
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2005-06-05 13:38:33]
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Re: Lover's heart
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by shelby on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 02:16:00 PM AEST
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flowing and nicely done
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Re: Lover's heart
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 02:41:41 PM AEST
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another good one,
"An abode of grace in restless sea,
with youthful waves and deep dreams,
WOW, very beautiful. |
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Re: Lover's heart
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by dreamer_for_eternity on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 04:06:25 PM AEST
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| awesome word choice! this was VERY well written! you have a loda talent, dont let it ever go to waste! |
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