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Stranger, RIP
Contributed by
dreamer_for_eternity
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Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 03:23:27 PM in AEST
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Ive never met you
Youve never heard of me
Theres no chance Ill meet you
Since now you rest in peace
Although I didnt know you
Ive heard numerous tales
Sorrow seeks your blood
While you no longer prevail
And end of the most unexpected
Never assumed that day
And if you were still here on Earth
They wonder what youd say
To turn back time
Is out of reach
As are you
Under eternal sleep
Just as the world
Was at your fingertips
It was ripped out of
Your unsuspecting grip
Leaving your daughters,
Abandoning your ex-wife
They know you didnt mean to
An unintentional end to life
And I pray that your last days
Were days that you had cherished
Stranger, since youre gone now,
Rest in peace, for you have perished
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Dedicated to my best friend's father
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Re: Stranger, RIP
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 03:27:13 PM AEST
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This is a wonderful tribute. I think you did a really good job with this write, and luckily your friend has you in this time of need...
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Re: Stranger, RIP
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by AMph on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 03:51:08 PM AEST
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| Sad moments bring out such great art. Did real well with this poem. Powerful in its structure and verbiage. He is a stranger to us all, but he will be missed. |
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Re: Stranger, RIP
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by twisted_dreams on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 09:38:23 PM AEST
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Wow.. that is a very very good poem! Its great of you to write something like taht for a friend thats in need.. Tell her im thinking about her and i will keep her in my prayers! Great write
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