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A Picture Says...
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 05:17:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Typical, hypocritical
cruel, cynical
Dark and foreboding
full of self loathing
Emotionally stunted
misery hunted
Player, game
hurtful aim
Childish, disdain
out for pain
Logical insanity
full of vanity
Heartless, cold
mentally not old
Out for number one
from love you run
and now...without further adieu
this...THIS is about YOU.
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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2005-06-05 17:17:18]
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Re: A Picture Says...
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by jyssvw22 on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 05:23:50 PM AEST
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wow
why so angry scorp?
nice write |
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Re: A Picture Says...
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by jyssvw22 on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 05:29:15 PM AEST
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hey scorp i love the style of this poem...hmmm...where did you learn this style....its fabulous..bye bye scorp
awesome write! |
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Re: A Picture Says...
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 06:43:25 PM AEST
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Bittersweet words Scorp.
Brilliant write
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: A Picture Says...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 07:13:34 PM AEST
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| oh my my , angry and wonderful, people look at pics of themself and feel this way i know i regretfully sometimes do and other honest people will say the same.very truthful and great write |
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Re: A Picture Says...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 07:16:29 PM AEST
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| i had to come back and rate this piece, what a wonderful style and talent |
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Re: A Picture Says...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 07:22:46 PM AEST
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| Wounderful write scorp,hope to see a happy one in the same style soon. |
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Re: A Picture Says...
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 07:43:04 PM AEST
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I see tiny glimmers of sunshine peeking through the darkness. I expect one day we shall view glorious rays of sunshine from a no longer haunted woman. She will be bright and strong and happy and shall rejoice in her realization of reality. Soon, soon, soon my spirits say.
smiles
Rita |
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Re: A Picture Says...
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by mylastwords on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 01:12:52 AM AEST
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Indeed it is angry! I like though!!! It is very hard, sharp and direct to the point. Very concise!! Keep it up!!
xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx |
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Re: A Picture Says...
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 08:26:20 AM AEST
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wow!!!! great job!!! i always luv ur work thou!
i have problems with ma father as well, actually i think ill post my poem about him now that were on tha subject, lol
anywho...keep up tha great work!! :)
*~peace and love~* |
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Re: A Picture Says...
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 08:30:00 AM AEST
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ok, nevermind, i guess i already did, lolz!
~PEACE~ |
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Re: A Picture Says...
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by In_a_while on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 08:31:15 AM AEST
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| very nice write!!! you're quite the sniper for words! it was very emotionally strong and i liked it a lot.. Thanks for sharing!! dw |
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Re: A Picture Says...
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by Arden on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 09:52:17 AM AEST
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others say it is an angry poem, and it is, but more so then that. more like this poem has many layers.
i dont really like when a poem is layed out such as this, but i think that it works perfectly here.
great use on the vocab. and nice smooth and simple rhyming.
5/5
this was a great poem.
-Rebekah |
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Re: A Picture Says...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 04:30:57 PM AEST
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very emotional and well expressed as such!
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Re: A Picture Says...
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by weepingprophet on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 01:01:39 AM AEST
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you f***ing people you make me sick. is hurt only skin deep to you? is anger a feeling and not a characteristic. who we are is built in our self denial. you are all blind. where is the awe or the appreciation for the screams in this peice? where is your intelligence in the congratulations? you look at 500 "works" "poems" all your uselessly titled exibitions a day and forget that behind every word there is a murderer behind every analogy every metaphor every regret there is a human being capable of what none of us could possibly begin to conceive in a thousand years of wisdom's conquest. we are all vessels of an untold story all veins pumping blood to the heart of humanity and we're collapsing. you people breath on sh*t and that's all you're worth. would you take a look around and realize that you are not in every picture!
~hauntedscorp, i don't know you i have just read this write as a first impression of your work, i felt you hiding in these words i felt your tears hit the paper calloused and fragile. embrace what you have, our divinity is in our flaws.~weepingprophet |
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Re: A Picture Says...
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 5th October 2020 @ 01:54:10 AM AEST
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Juicy Scorp you feisty little vixen that has gone missin/'/
Tim said we wrote similar at times. I see that now.
Awesome my friend....Awesome |
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