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Venomous
Contributed by
Ranchan
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Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 05:33:28 PM in AEST
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Her voice like venomous tears,
attracting every ones ears.
Can you here the sound,
Can you walk around,
Her voice filled with control,
Making me incapable to let go.
March away with a ear to deaf,
Walk away before its time for death.
Voice takes me over,
Voice that carries my lover.
No escape
No escape.
Can you hear the venomous voice,
Run because you wont have a choice.
Run in a cowards way,
Run in a passionate way.
Stop to listen at the beutiful and venomous sound ,
Her everything die for that venomous sound.
But as it all comes back you life is gone,
Your soul and days where not for fun.
Just listen in a manner that lets us play,
Listen in a way that your days may end,
be quite while the sound and dont say,
Just think for ever that it is your freind.
Copyright ©
Ranchan
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2005-06-05 17:33:28]
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Re: Venomous
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 06:54:07 PM AEST
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| sad and nicely written. |
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Re: Venomous
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd December 2005 @ 09:06:37 PM AEST
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sad, scared, and something else....written about wonderfully
beautiful write
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Re: Venomous
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by ek_da_poet on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 03:27:04 PM AEST
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| it was alrite well written nice rhyming keep it up pe@ce |
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