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From Bud to Blossom
Contributed by
dynamicx
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Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 05:44:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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To move on from a state
Of certain gloom
To cut out the bud
And then to bloom
Flower with talent
Express thy true thought
Say what you feel
Overcomb what you faught
Use the energy of good
To feed the right dog
Instead of displaying
The filth of a hog
A light waits to guide
On the right course
Put in the best effort
To be a work horse
Benefits need sacrifice
To make morals so rich
My future's in sight
The past was a glitch
Now to create action
To make me feel strong
Be mindful of others
Let's all get along
Cherish those inner thoughts
That create your great dreams
Life''s so much more joy
Than all the suffering it seems
Stick to your morals
That tell you what's right
Without dedication and focus
Self loses might
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dynamicx
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2005-06-05 17:44:07]
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Re: From Bud to Blossom
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by AMph on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 05:59:34 PM AEST
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| awesome job. its liberating isn't it? keep doing more. I enjoy reading it. |
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Re: From Bud to Blossom
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 06:19:29 PM AEST
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What an excellent job! It seems like you put a lot of effort into this write, and it paid off...Well done, I am very impressed. One little tiny glitch though....: 'faught' should be 'fought.' Keep up the great writes!
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Re: From Bud to Blossom
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by grin69 on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 11:55:25 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed reading your poem. Good job! |
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