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Alive
Contributed by
gunda
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Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 07:13:59 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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How can a person sit and say I am okay and alive,
and still be as far away as I
How can a person like I say that this is my life
I like it this way
Why do I like to put myself in this dark
How do I manage to force the light away
I see you reaching for me and I push you far away
Let me have my pain don`t take it away
It is only the pain that can tell me
I am alive
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2005-06-05 19:13:59]
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Re: Alive
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 07:17:35 PM AEST
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| so such a sad poem, nicely written! |
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Re: Alive
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by kareless on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 03:44:44 AM AEST
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and when the tears fall from our eyes, then can we tell that we still care. Bother to care, to feel the pain, and the pain tells us we still feel.
Feelings & thoughts are the creators of pain, w/o them it could not thrive. To feel & think is the painfulness it is to be alive.
Inspiring write, thank you! Very impressed, not easy...
Excellent job!
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