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Loving you
Contributed by
xdeadxdollyx
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Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 08:37:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Ill wrap my arms around you
I will surround you with a light
Ill keep you safe and warm
In the darkness of the night
Ill give you all the love I have
To see that beautiful smile on your face
Ill hold you forever
No one will ever take your place
Ill take your hand
And take all the pain away
If I ever lost you for life
Nothing would ever be the same
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xdeadxdollyx
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2005-06-05 20:37:41]
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Re: Loving you
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 08:46:06 PM AEST
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awesome poem. i loved it!!! wish i could find someone like that.... good luck with this! keep up the good work!!!
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Re: Loving you
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by gwenevere on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 05:08:39 PM AEST
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| I like the sentiment and the content apart from the constant use of I'll.I think it would read better if you found another word,Lovely poem non the less, ros |
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Re: Loving you
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by jessalynn on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 01:21:30 PM AEST
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| it was lovely good write very touching |
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