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Gun in Hand
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 08:43:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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As I sit here wondering
My hand is reaching
I feel the gun
In this world I feel shunned
I grab it now
And tell you how
I am dead here
Because these tears
Didnt stop flowing
I was overfilling
With hate and regret
I could forgive, but not forget
I felt unloved
I could not be saved
I just couldnt take it
I couldnt live like this
Unloved and out in the cold
It was starting to get old
I was ready
My hand was steady
Believe it or not
As it was the gun I got
That I slipped into
My hand as I thought of you
All that were my friends
All you who left me to the end
Didnt care that I said goodbye
Didnt think that I would die
But look: I did
Dont forgive
Me, for I was the one
That killed myself with the gun
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Re: Gun in Hand
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by poet70 on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 08:58:47 PM AEST
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That is dark and depressing to read, I suppose for a suicide poem, * which I don't read much * it is pretty good, you really was able to take me into the poem and make the picture seem real, ( TOO REAL ) hope you are ok?
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Re: Gun in Hand
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 09:12:40 PM AEST
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Very raw with emotion...Sounds like you're going through a real struggle. I hope everything's okay.
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Re: Gun in Hand
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by spazz911 on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 09:16:26 PM AEST
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well another emotional poem sprints
but i must say i did not enjoy the lines
All that were my “friends”
All you who left me to the end
Didn’t care that I said goodbye
because i pray that you dont actualy think that I would not care or that you don't think i would ever leave you alone in this world. I am always here wether you use me or not and wether you like it or not you are stuck with me.
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Re: Gun in Hand
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by blue_angel on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 09:41:50 PM AEST
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SDF!!!! what is this? no no no the only gun you will be holding up to ANYONE'S head will be a water gun... u hear me? lol hey thinking in summer terms here...
and ditto to what kc sed... dont u dare think we dont care. talk to us so we can help u. i talk to u despite wat u think. openess mite help you in a situation like this. im always hear for u and ill always lend an ear!
luv n hugs,
jennie* xXx |
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Re: Gun in Hand
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by emystar on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 03:05:11 AM AEST
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U conveinced me and I pray this is just writing.
huggs, luv, prayer,
emy |
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