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Common Man's Grave
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 10:25:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Body does decay but yet purifies of all blemish of sin
At last I gain righteousness whilst death pales my skin
Bones rot away right down to there structured marrow
As I am buried into the ground and saved from all things shallow
Deteriorating heart now at much better use
Sparing of thy spirit from all pain and livings abuse
Ceasing to bleed as lasting external scars do heal
Just like the painful internal scars I can no longer feel
Lying here forever in this coffin I have been confined
Engulfed by the dark but free from the darkness of my mind
All thoughts do perish so I am haunted no more
Finally at peace and no longer bound by any law
Imprisonment of the senses but one of magnificent creation
Perishing of an unfulfilling life, my only fascination
I so desire oh yes I do darkly crave
To enter into Hades, the common mans grave
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pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-06-05 22:25:43]
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Re: Common Man's Grave
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by emystar on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 10:33:41 PM AEST
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Very intriging write.
You've taken away the sting of death.
Awesomely written.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Common Man's Grave
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 11:07:11 PM AEST
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I love this rach, beautiful in such a dark sense
Amazing
~Clark |
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Re: Common Man's Grave
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by Doriens_Picture on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 12:48:20 AM AEST
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this is a difrent write i likes it
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Re: Common Man's Grave
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 12:53:16 AM AEST
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| wow amazing.... |
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Re: Common Man's Grave
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by Faust on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 10:46:30 PM AEST
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| a very good poem i just wish it was longer |
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