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paint my canvas grey
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 09:58:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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So here i am, this nothing man
waiting next in line
i sip on tea, not meant for me
i'm stating i'm not fine
the doors are deep, to calm coffin sleep
i say long prayers no more
i step into, the ocean's blue
then meet the river's door
my mistake is breathing lake
what's a bullet to a stain?
it's mushroom cloud clean thunder POW!
or morphine to the brain
but i'll stay calm, for one more dawn
then paint my canvas grey
i'll capture birds with playful words
and thanks for what you say...
dw
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2005-06-06 09:58:32]
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Re: paint my canvas grey
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 10:01:06 AM AEST
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I love the third stanza, and the ending was well worded too. Nice job.
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Re: paint my canvas grey
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by carolinehope on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 12:45:39 AM AEST
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| The last stanza is my favorite. This is well-written. |
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