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rooted
Contributed by
stoic_squirm
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Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 06:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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look at me, im all 24
still crawling, still withstanding
what is suppose to be shame
tell me, how do you use your muscles
what had i been thinking -
that i needed a lift?
but i have been lifted.
yet i go back to bed -
my soil
i dont know what is important anymore
im running out of excuses
i know, when i loose you
i will loose myself
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Re: rooted
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 09:59:08 AM AEST
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Great little peice here I hope you find yourself!
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Re: rooted
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by SusieQ on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 10:00:29 PM AEST
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| Figuring out where you are is a good first step to knowing where you want to go. You express yourself well. I think you will find writing to be an important part of your future. |
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