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A World Outside
Contributed by
EmpressTayloria
on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 04:18:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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i. tuesday
I just found comprimise
in a sullen left eye
blue and green (and yours)
Does the love that surrounds you get you down?
Or is that look a permanent mark
of floating disgrace from your cruel idols?
Tell me your secrets
What you need...
I'm not gonna leave...
ii. wednesday
I'm looking around and watching you spin
we'll wait till monday for a step outside
you pretend all you want
------I don't mind.
Tell me you see this
This waiting lonliness like the screams from the hall
Tell me your hear this with your own eyes
Show me the sighs that are lighting my dreams
Promise me you see the sky falling
in your world
iii. thursday
I just found a friend
in one of your turns
your frantic circling shadow birthed another lifeless monster
your mind is blotching
and I'm melting in your sunspots
Say you desire me past these april showers
Say you need me in this world of ours...
iv. friday
Somwhow we lost our way
past our last fall on unceasing steam
lost our way home
-----(I'm still here for you)
Helps too far away
Tell me your reasons
Let me see theses signs
-----(I'll still be here/hear)
v. saturday
You're so far away
couldn't reach you in time
Beneath this moonless night
you've caught fire....
You're so far, too far away...
I've locked my world outside
and it's changing within...
vi. sunday
the day of rest rattles on forever
the neon lights of ecstacy glow brighter still
you're breathless and silent behind your trigger
but weeping...
your spine is a twitching mess of bone and scab
brought on by your twisted dance of endless lust
our world is nothing more than a smear of blood and glitter...
...look love. Look at the sunday drivers stare...
vii. monday
by the dawning of monday's light
My shaking fingers/rottinghands find this freezing door knob
...but I cannot find the key...
--so let's stay, my lonely love. And watch my world past before my eyes....--
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2005-06-06 16:18:01]
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Re: A World Outside
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st January 2006 @ 06:41:34 PM AEST
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| Wow! thats all i have to say! great poem..i would love to see you keep writing. |
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Re: A World Outside
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 10:01:00 AM AEST
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there are a lot of ideas here
i love the set up
well done |
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