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Perveted mind
Contributed by
heartless_soul
on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 05:15:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Perverted mind
Your perverted inner mind
Will be the end of you
For in it I find
What you do
There are things there that are not good
Stuff that is wrong
Things that fear you should
In there I cannot be long
Your reality is a fake
It's what is not
From it you will not wake
Against these thoughts I have fought
But that struggle is at an end
It is one that was lost
And in to your mind that did send
Away from you, all your dreams you have tossed
Every thing you think, is wrong
They will be what keep you there
In this you do not belong
After hearing this do you still not care?
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Re: Perveted mind
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by DynamicX on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 08:28:39 PM AEST
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Hey I am going through some things myself where others are telling me my life is wrong... but its so hard just to hear an error of my ways without identification. How can change arrise without knowledge? Geez, I need to write... yours is well written and brings a good question to mind!
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Re: Perveted mind
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by EverlastingDawn on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 06:36:13 PM AEST
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I like this poem, it doesn't sugar-coat things like a lot of things do these days. It has a hrash rawness to it that fits the poem so perfectly. I think that it's written well and that it's very emotion-filled. I do hope things get better for you. Great Write.
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