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Truely Ever lasting
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 05:50:48 PM in AEST
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Everything about you is truly
Everlasting and moves me just as your beauty
Moves every part of my world
My eyes turn from brown to beryl
For you are in the depths of my soul
You are the light that shines you are the sole
Reason for me being here and for wanting
You the way I do and longing
For your touch and for your arms around me
Everything that you find amazing in me would not be
In me if I did not have you
You are the reason I do what I do
Why I write the way I can
You have made me a far better and stronger man
Everything about you is truly
Everlasting and moves me just as your beauty
Shapes every part of my world
My eyes have changed from brown to beryl
For you are in the depths of me
You are everything I could ever need
You are the light that shines within me
You are what guides me on my way to be
All the things that I want to be for you
For you are all that I need to be true
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Re: Truely Ever lasting
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by heartless_soul on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 06:57:30 PM AEST
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"true sntaments felt by all who have ever love someone more then themselves."
this is a very loving poem and I know that she will find it no less, to say any thing else would be impolite of me. God bless. (may you two be happy for the rest of time.)
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Re: Truely Ever lasting
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by shelby on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 07:23:42 PM AEST
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lovely
Michelle |
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Re: Truely Ever lasting
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:06:38 PM AEST
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| Love that is everlasting is seen within these lines, Beautiful write, muaw. |
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Re: Truely Ever lasting
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:16:09 PM AEST
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this ones great too, i love the way you repeat certain lines for emphasize & i love how you emphasised her beauty.
well done, a great piece |
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Re: Truely Ever lasting
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 03:42:32 PM AEST
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a beautiful and heartfelt write..
she will love it.
I also like the echo of certain lines..
very well written.
B |
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