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I want to be whole
Contributed by
monkeychow
on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 12:36:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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I WANT TO BE WHOLEBY: OMAVE OGUNDE
I WISH A GIRL WOULD SAY
I MISS YOU, I NEED YOU,
IM WEAK WITHOUT YOUR TOUCH.
WITH ALL THE LOVE I GIVE
IS THAT ASKING TOO MUCH?
I GIVE MY HEART AND SOUL
BUT IN THE END I PAY THE TOLL.
AND THAT BREAKS ME DOWN
SO TO BUILD MYSELF UP
I BECAME THE CLASS CLOWN
LOOKING FOR LOVE
BUT NOBODY IN THIS WORLD
KNOWS WHAT LOVE IS
I TRY IN MY POEMS
TO HIT IT ON THE DOT
BUT EVERYTIME I MISS
I FEEL LIKE I LOSSED.
HERE GOES AGAIN.
LOVE IS CONSISTANTLY
THINKING AND WISHING
BETTER FOR THEM
THAN YOU WOULD FOR YOU
IN YOU IN YOUR WILDESSED DREAMS.
ITS WATCHING HER BOYFRIND
MISS TREAT HER
BUT LEAVING BECAUCE SHES HAPPY
BEING REJECTED BY SOMEONE
WHO PEOPLE SEE AS A LONER
BUT TELL TH WHOLE WORLD
YOU SPOKE WITH HER
AND THATS ALL THAT MATTERS
THATS WHAT I WANT SOMEONE TO FEEL FOR ME
THATS WHY I WANT TO BE WHOLE.
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monkeychow
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2005-06-07 00:36:27]
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Re: I want to be whole
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by Jimmato on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 06:30:13 AM AEST
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| sounds like unrequited love, and lets face it nothing hurts worse, been there felt that. good poem |
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Re: I want to be whole
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by blue_angel on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:41:51 AM AEST
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aww thats so sad. i know just how u feel, except im on the side of the girl. feeling empty is one of the absolute worst feelings in the world, because when youre empty everything else is too. lonliness... dont let it conquer you. im here if u needa talk.
luv n hugs,
jennie* xXx |
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