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The Beginning
Contributed by
o7neves
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Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 05:51:03 AM in AEST
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I first met him, at a place to dance
And thought that maybe, Id want a chance
To get to know him, would be nice
But I thought about it, not once but twice
With a handful of attempts, we tried speaking on the phone
But the first few times, all I heard was a dial tone
That was quite hysterical, along with the e-mail
But didnt want anything, cuz my heart was still frail
And on top of it all, I was so messed up in the head
Because all I thought I wanted, was to get women in bed
Despite of everything, we decided to hang out
And I realized with him, the less I would pout
We continued to spend, more and more time with each other
And then out of nowhere, I had kissed another
Dont know why, I went and did it
Couldnt believe I acted, like such a d!ck
But everything was ok, cuz we had cleared the air
But two days later, I saw something I couldnt bare
He went ahead, and threw it in my face
And after all that, I knew my place
Things seemed to be falling, right in order
And thought about him being, the father of my daughter
But thoughts came creeping, about his ex-wife
Along with knowing, he had a whole other life
So naturally of course, I felt a bit insecure
But when Im with him, my feelings are so pure
Something happened, while spending so much time
That I just cant wait, for him to be mine
Im also becoming, more and more of a wreck
Because soon hell be leaving, to go back to Iraq
I dont want him to go, I want him here
Every time I think about it, I begin to tear
I know I dont know him, all that well
But part of me feels, like I already fell
His feelings for me, Im not quite sure
But pain for me, I can no longer endure
He makes me melt, just by how he stares
And I fear nothing, as long as Im in his care
Ive got four days left, to spend with him
Then after I leave, my life will be dim
But that is life, so Ill take it day by day
And hope that maybe, hell get to stay
When Im with him, Im overwhelmed with emotions
I feel as though Ive taken, some sort of love potion
As you already know, the him is really you
And I know my feelings, for you are true
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o7neves
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Re: The Beginning
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by Jimmato on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 06:26:01 AM AEST
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| hope u sort things through and.... careful |
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Re: The Beginning
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by animusutputo on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 12:54:50 PM AEST
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Well what can i say....
i'll start with.. very nice.. poem..
And also.. sorry for Both.. "incidences" since i was involved in both... maybe one day we can talk about it... clear the air..
In any case its nice to see some of what you're feeling down in writing... Keep it up |
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Re: The Beginning
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by CurtisC on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 04:32:04 PM AEST
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like i've said all along things are gonna work out for you, might not be right away but in due time...you'll get the great life a great person like you deserves eventually :) great write!
Curtis
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