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The Chain
Contributed by
Undeadsuperstar
on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 06:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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you put your shackles on my heart and mind
call it love
give me permission just to be alive
call it love
cmon baby tell me what i can and cannot do
call it love
i loved you once but now im seeing through
i called it love
each day your controlling games of insecurity
you called it love
i always smile for you but its really misery
is this love
hold me down with expectations i cannot meet
what is love
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2003-01-04 06:40:00]
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Re: The Chain
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 08:48:44 PM AEST
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This is such a sad write, it's sad when one is treated this way for no reason at all, i see alot of lack of communication in this one....thanks for sharing it my friend....i enjoy reading your poetry as you already know...
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Re: The Chain
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by c on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 09:18:04 PM AEST
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| i really liked this one. your emotion caught in silent thoughts. that's amazing. |
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