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Sometimes....
Contributed by
FallenAngels
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Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 03:49:47 PM in AEST
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...my mind shatters
my thoughts trail off
where did i leave them, will they find their way back?
i lost all sense of time
this pressure on my chest
steals my breath
is it
just the calamity of thoughts circling in my head that is making me
weak
or is it something more....
open me up and look inside
tell me....what do you find?
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2005-06-07 15:49:47]
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Re: Sometimes....
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by c2b6s on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 04:44:12 PM AEST
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| i get a sense of panick from this poem. Good job in conveying that emotion |
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Re: Sometimes....
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd December 2005 @ 09:03:56 PM AEST
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confusion...panic...and the feeling of being overwhelmed. all 3 emotions conveyed beautifully
great write
- Beth - |
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Re: Sometimes....
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 06:23:03 PM AEST
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i liked this write.
very turbulent. |
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