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Behind Me
Contributed by
SlimJim
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Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 04:34:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I can hear you I hear you gasping
I can feel you there
I can hear you breathing
Thats what is it I fear
I Know your there
But you dont answer me
Why cant I see?
Any thing.....anymore?
The hot breath on the back of my neck
The slow sound of every.shallow breath
I know you still are here
The thing that I fear......death
I know your there
But you dont answer me
Why cant I see?
Any thing....anymore?
All I ever had
Washed away by your un-faith-full-ness
I cried sometimes
Not anymore the breathing has stopped!
My sights come back to me
And now I see
You lying on the floor
And I just stare, as I lock the door
Behind me!!
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SlimJim
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2005-06-07 16:34:20]
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Re: Behind Me
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 05:00:32 PM AEST
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Nice! I like the way you laid this out...Good job.
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Re: Behind Me
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by SlimJim on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 05:05:13 PM AEST
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| Thank you ^__^ it makes me all tingly inside to know someone like me.......lol j/k anyways, thanks. |
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