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the brake up tragedy
Contributed by
russ-dawg
on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 08:19:01 PM in AEST
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come into the tragedy of me and you
and never again should you wake up
after it is all said and done
click goes the triger of the gun
and its just getting started now
babe you deserve this
it will bring you down
about six feet
this is hard to say but its over
we're finished
and i never want to see you again
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2005-06-07 20:19:01]
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Re: the brake up tragedy
(User Rating: 1 )
by Freak-of-the-Week on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 05:28:15 AM AEST
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I wish I could shoot all the people who hurt me...oh, hahaha, oops! That's one of those darn "psychotic" thoughts. Bad Chelsea! Bad! 0_o
Yeah. But nice poem, though. Again, there were some really catchy phrases in it... |
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