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The Extremely Tough Spider-murderer
Contributed by
thecarpets
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Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:04:21 PM in AEST
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His sentences are meaningless,
His skin is tanned orange,
But he's killed a spider with his foot, So he is tough,
Everyone is supposed to be scared,
Shaking in their polyester,
But no one ever even takes notice,
His hands are soft, His face is pale,
Shoes are a clean white,
(Except for the Spider on the sole),
His eyes fail at striking an intense gaze,
And settle for a bright-eyed stare,
His hands are pulling down his pants,
So the bottoms drape the ants,
And He chews his gum hard,
He tries to light a cigarette,
But he doesn't like the taste,
But he smokes it anyway,
He tries on an elaborate swagger,
But he looks rheumatic,
But he wears it anyway,
And he sees a spider on the ground,
And he kills it with his foot,
And he feels pretty tough.
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Re: The Extremely Tough Spider-murderer
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 05:05:18 PM AEST
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| it was fun to read |
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Re: The Extremely Tough Spider-murderer
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 11:03:05 PM AEST
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| Cool write...I was picturing the arrogant ass in my mind. Well written. Peace, Laura |
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