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Like Me
Contributed by
Yuri
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Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:39:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Dear Child,
do not try to hide
you've told him
how you feel inside
now let love
take it's coarse
do not try
to make things forced
don't take your anger
out on them
don't tell them
that their souls' condemned
try to laugh
your whole life through
don't let your past
try to haunt you
live each day
like it's your last
smile it through
forget your past
Use this adivice
and just maybe
you won't turn out
to be like me.
Copyright ©
Yuri
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2005-06-07 22:39:11]
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Re: Like Me
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:41:16 PM AEST
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good poem.
smiles,
Rita |
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Re: Like Me
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:44:51 PM AEST
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good work.
I don't see why others want believe u 'cause after all we channle voices from different places. it's the inner voice that makes each writer unique.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Like Me
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by Yuri on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:46:58 PM AEST
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| Thank you. |
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Re: Like Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:47:55 PM AEST
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| the only way you can hear other voices in your head is if your possessed...but good poem |
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Re: Like Me
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by Yuri on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:48:49 PM AEST
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| Thanks for beleiveing me. |
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Re: Like Me
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by waos on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 11:00:53 PM AEST
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Sweet stuff, it's good to listen to your inner voice, it sounds like yours
is right on track too. My favorite bit was the part about not letting
your past haunt you. That's important.
Nice job.
~Kara |
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Re: Like Me
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by Yuri on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 06:13:57 PM AEST
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| Thank you again! |
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