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rickety bridge
Contributed by
karmen
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Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 11:50:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Watch your footing privilege,
for you may fall,
and as you walk along the broken bridge,
remember you almost had it all.
An amazing life, filling with hope,
but that's just the dream,
in real like you're walking a tightrope,
high above, and on a torn seam.
Your dream and reality must divide,
you now know whats real and fake,
with a fear you collide,
for the first time you feel awake.
You now know pain,
and see life the true way.
Nothing to lose, nothing to gain,
except life as a rickety bridge, until a new day.
Copyright ©
karmen
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2005-06-07 23:50:48]
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Re: rickety bridge
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by Poser on
Friday, 23rd December 2005 @ 12:09:07 AM AEST
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Good visual!
Thanks for putting that up, I enjoyed it! |
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Re: rickety bridge
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by PuppyChow on
Sunday, 25th December 2005 @ 12:38:26 PM AEST
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| nice similes there. i liked the comparison. thanks for the great read. |
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Re: rickety bridge
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by Cynic on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 07:58:17 PM AEST
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| Thanks for sharing! |
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