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Storm
Contributed by
Sonic_phoenix
on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 09:33:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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lightning crashes a distant shore
me eyes glow wishing to see more
the waves crash around the beach
hoping to please the gods i do beseach
arms wrap around me tight
i do not struggle or start to fight
his warmth gives me new wings to fly
together we could fly through the storm
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2005-06-08 09:33:24]
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Re: Storm
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by declinefoale on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 10:25:53 AM AEST
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I like this it's a nice romantic poem without being soppy.
I'm not sure about the last two lines though they don't seem to flow like the rest do. But what do I know? |
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Re: Storm
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 12:43:54 PM AEST
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very nice write... it was loaded with imagery and good feelings (especially the second stanza). thanks for sharing!!
dw
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Re: Storm
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 03:50:36 AM AEST
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| brilliant, sounds like love to me,,,,, |
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