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Juggling tears in the air
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 12:21:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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we set up our sins, like hearts under pins
and sweat behind masks of despair
all the dark frowns, on orange coloured clowns
are from juggling they're tears in the air
the horses are black, leading clouds to the back
of my house where i was a child
i stood on a ball, throwing hate to the wall
then wondering why pain felt so mild
i swallowed my sorrow, like old meat tomorrow
but now i like painting my soul
the colours are bright, despite the dark night
how else would i feel whole...
dw
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Re: Juggling tears in the air
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by expired_promises on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 12:28:57 PM AEST
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| good poem...why do we hide our emotions? why smile for the people we see everyday when really we're falling apart? |
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Re: Juggling tears in the air
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by Arden on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 12:49:57 PM AEST
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By far the best poem that i have read today.
Love the concept to the piece and the imagery. wrecking of depth and emotion. 5/5
loved this.
-Rebekah |
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Re: Juggling tears in the air
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by ivoryA on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 01:59:26 PM AEST
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| that was very well written the imagery was very good and using clowns for a metaphor was a good choice |
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Re: Juggling tears in the air
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 02:15:08 PM AEST
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Excellent job!! Your wordplay is great.
Scorp. |
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