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Crimson Rain
Contributed by
ivoryA
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Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 12:27:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I can feel the rain
Beating down on me-
Needles.
Piercing my skin,
The stinging pain
Makes my body tremble.
I kneel on the ground
Raise my arms and yell-
Everything.
All that I am flows,
From me to the ground
In a waterfall of red.
Copyright ©
ivoryA
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2005-06-08 12:27:39]
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Re: Crimson Rain
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 12:49:51 AM AEST
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| Brief and powerful write. I quite enjoyed it. Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: Crimson Rain
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by carolinehope on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 04:34:07 PM AEST
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| Short but meaningful-- my favorite type of poem. This is very well written. |
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Re: Crimson Rain
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by princess_of_pain on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 10:32:25 PM AEST
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| i thought this poem was very powerful and strong. i liked it a lot. great job. |
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