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Changing Hands
Contributed by
ivoryA
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Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 12:38:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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you stabbed a knife in my heart
and turned it side to side
tearing me appart
you laughed with satisfaction
as my life was slowly taken
but your fear of the truth
is keeping me awaken
I'm staring at you
looking right into your eyes
shaming you
and pleading too
because i want my life
and everything i am
I want it to be mine again
back in my hands
not your bloody palms
I can make it on my own
if you just step away
and let me take control
Copyright ©
ivoryA
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2005-06-08 12:38:41]
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Re: Changing Hands
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by poet70 on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 02:53:05 PM AEST
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Very good poem, and it explained a break up very well, and how it seems the other person can still have some control of you even after the break up, very well written, and you didn't need to make long and wordy either to make your point, I liked that also when some poets are able to make their point in a fairly short poem. Awesome and thanks for posting it so I had the chance to enjoying reading it and commenting on it .
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