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i try
Contributed by
angel_eyez
on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 06:46:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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try so hard to make it stop
the feelings for you i have inside
but its so strong it hurts to say
the i shall love you in this way
when i see you
you make me smile
when i feel you
it makes me cry
for you inside i cannot bear
i need you so much
i need you here
so i can make my feelings clear
i hate it when we do not talk
or hug
or be friends
or when you are not near
i wish these feelings would go away
so for ever in my heart you can stay
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2005-06-08 18:46:12]
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Re: i try
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 08:15:20 PM AEST
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Angel_eyez
Sorry I somewhat know how you feel.
I had my first love walk out on me.
After ten years married and children involved she left.
I was heart broken and never have I gotten intirely over her.
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Re: i try
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by c2b6s on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 10:21:38 PM AEST
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| This poem is so true to life. Once in a while you meet a person and no matter what they do to you, you will always love them more than anything. Sometimes I think it would be easier if we could just shut off our hearts. But good poem and i know exactly how you feel. |
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Re: i try
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by expired_promises on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 12:11:51 AM AEST
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| i really enjoyed your poem, sometimes you love someone so much it hurts and it's hard to realize that anything they do is actually hurting you |
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