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Moment to Last
Contributed by
lovingangel4u
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Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 03:51:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Its been days since I looked into your eyes
Time goes so slow and it makes me feel low
Calm outside but my heart is jumping inside
Not to be able to feel your arms hearing your voice that calms
Waiting in trepidation time gets closer now anticipation.
Hearts feels excitement as our eyes meet
Leaping chests drawn in any weather
Arms embracing finally together
Warm lips touch so gently and sweet
The same dream every time we meet.
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lovingangel4u
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2005-06-09 03:51:11]
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Re: Moment to Last
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by outsider on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:10:26 AM AEST
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I know exactly what you mean. This is a beautiful poem and you said it so well, each and every line sums up the emotions perfectly.
Jinna inhobbok hafna tha gra agam orst gu bragh. |
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Re: Moment to Last
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 05:45:27 AM AEST
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| nice write. sentiment has a hold on us all. |
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Re: Moment to Last
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by Sinned on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 06:46:43 AM AEST
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Lovingangel4u
Isn't it nice to antisipate
O' the beating heart rate
Looking here,there and having to wait
Enjoyed your poem
Now I gotta roam
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