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*Suicidal Reflection*
Contributed by
Chanti
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Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 02:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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"I want to die" is what she said,
the mirror image, ill never forget,
I couldnt believe those words came from me,
but my lips were the only moving ones that I could see,
my mirror reflection, told no lies,
for tears were streaming, from my eyes,
and though ive denied it, for so long,
it feels as if, i cant go on,
inside im hurting, inside im crying,
i feel such pain, feels like im dying,
you cant save me, I hate to say,
I dont know why, it had to be this way,
there was a time, I couldve been alright,
but this depression just isnt worth the fight,
you couldve helped me, instead of lying,
telling me, that I would be fine,
yet now it makes me wonder,
could I have made it through?
Maybe, I couldve been saved...
If I only had you.
Copyright ©
Chanti
... [
2003-01-04 14:20:00]
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Re: *Suicidal Reflection*
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 03:58:52 PM AEST
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| oh chanti, this is so beautiful, i love reading your poetry and i love this one...oh...it's so sad... |
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Re: *Suicidal Reflection*
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 05:06:23 PM AEST
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Dearest Chanti @-<-<<-
What the heart has once owned and had, it shall never lose, you have turned your pain into beauty and your beautiful soul shines through, ty for sharing this..
I do hope you are feeling better and I am always around if you'd like to talk:)
Your writing friend always Nessa
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Re: *Suicidal Reflection*
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by lilch4ever on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 05:10:23 PM AEST
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| Wow that was really deep. It was very good, yet so sad. I could feel your pain. It was also touching. Nicely written. |
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Re: *Suicidal Reflection*
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 05:27:24 PM AEST
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Wow, I cannot say what this poem made me feel... this was so powerful it just ached with pain... 'inside im hurting, inside im crying,' I loved that line because inside I hurt and cry and on the outside I rarely do so... Wow... u have such amazing talent Chanti
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Re: *Suicidal Reflection*
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 06:27:40 PM AEST
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Wow...what can I say that hasn't already said?? lovely write here...
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