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Weak
Contributed by
Jen54
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Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 10:08:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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weak
yeah, thats me
trying to get away
chained to the past
fighting for the key
crying till I can't breath
then seeing you there
makes me..
weak
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2005-06-09 10:08:28]
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Re: Weak
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 09:13:57 AM AEST
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| I like it. Can definitely relate because of my own weakness...at least I hope I can. I believe I am understanding it correctly. Nicely done. |
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Re: Weak
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 09:57:00 PM AEST
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| Sweet Poem |
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