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my plan
Contributed by
ebooibo
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Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 10:25:35 AM in AEST
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There is no thought require
for this task at hand
Breathing is so simple
It requires not a plan
She took your precious breath away
And youre trying to get it back
Your breathing is still sporadic
You cant seem to get the knack
Patience my friend patience
It will come back to you soon
Inhale and exhale
It's the easiest thing to do.
Copyright ©
ebooibo
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2005-06-09 10:25:35]
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Re: my plan
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 10:59:42 AM AEST
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wow, so simple, and short, but yet...there's something about it...not sure what it is, but it's good. it makes you think
great write
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