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Warped
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 12:33:54 PM in AEST
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Black is to white
what amity is to spite
Love and emotion
enter with commotion
Disdain and hate
earmarks of change and fate
Frustration and sorrow
tell tales of tomorrow
Pent up; bursting inside
blocking the path is pride
Freedom is to chains
what fulfillment is to abstain
An anxious soul
on foot patrol
Scanning the scene
for something pristine
To sever a tie
not the easiest to apply
You to salvation
like idea to innovation
A hawk to a mouse
like a fox to henhouse
How do these jumbled thoughts agree?
Well, we shall just wait and see...
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
... [
2005-06-09 12:33:54]
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Re: Warped
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by jyssvw22 on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 12:42:50 PM AEST
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mabey the point is that they dont agree..lol...
nice write scorp |
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Re: Warped
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:30:31 PM AEST
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| This was a very good poem, I liked all of the examples you used in it, um, it actually sounds like the game of life, the game you never win. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Warped
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by freckle on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 09:52:56 PM AEST
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I love playing with words and you did a great job doing so in this write! Yeah!! Great job!!!
Carol
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Re: Warped
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by toserious2 on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 01:10:00 PM AEST
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| You speak Your tongue in very much of mine..........Depth,viision,speculation and wonder.I adore it..I like to chat with you on thi s very weekend..Plz,join me on "toserious2@yahoo.com" |
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Re: Warped
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 08:53:49 PM AEST
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| scorp, your originiality and talent is what you can always rely on when you write, it after all is why i love to come visit your account page =] |
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Re: Warped
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd July 2015 @ 12:05:03 PM AEST
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Frustration and sorrow
tell tales of tomorrow
Or yesterday!
Quite the puzzle you have built here. Me likes.
*wonders how I missed this one* But I look at the date and I was going through some ***** back then.
On to see what else I may have missed. |
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Re: Warped
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 30th August 2020 @ 10:06:27 PM AEST
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Love it Scorp.......
My kinda poem......
Missing you.... |
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Re: Warped
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 18th January 2021 @ 11:24:38 AM AEST
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Still digging this!!
Pretty slick too. |
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