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The Blind Mans Tears
Contributed by
FigurelessShadow
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Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:01:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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He was blind,
He was dying,
He was sad,
He cryed,
Nothing came out,
My life is his tear,
Blank, sad.
Im crying,
Not dying,
Im sad,
In the pain of love,
Im caught in its spell,
That can not be undone.
The blind man cryed,
As he died,
His tears were blank,
His tears were faded,
Blurry, distorted,
My life is his cying,
Now I have a,
Knife in my hands,
And now I'm dying...
Copyright ©
FigurelessShadow
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2005-06-09 16:01:35]
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Re: The Blind Mans Tears
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 05:45:13 PM AEST
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Wonderful title I don't think the poem quite fits though. Keep writing. :)
--amanda-- |
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Re: The Blind Mans Tears
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 06:21:15 PM AEST
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I think this was a very good write. You maintained the flow and cadence very well, but most important to me was the subject of the write. Very well done, indeed.
keep writing. |
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Re: The Blind Mans Tears
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by lady-quiet-dreamer on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 07:03:24 PM AEST
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| very beautiful and moveing |
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