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A Field Of Flowers
Contributed by
sinned
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Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 07:58:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Yellow splattered dandylion.
Timithy dasies browneyesusans.
Queen Anns lace a field of flowers.
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sinned
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2005-06-09 19:58:59]
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Re: A Field Of Flowers
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by Kitty06 on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 08:19:08 PM AEST
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| This is truly a beautiful haiku. I don't know much about haiku, but by what I have read, I think this is wonderful. |
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Re: A Field Of Flowers
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 08:49:33 AM AEST
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Yes indeed, this is a beautiful Haiku Denis.
I have never paid too much attention to Haikus, but this is simply beautiful
Blessings
Elizabeth |
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Re: A Field Of Flowers
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 05:15:39 AM AEST
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its a nice write but its not a haiku
you should have five syllables in the
first line then 7 in the 2nd then five again in
the last line let try to help exaple
yellow splattered rose
2 2 1=5 syllables
beautiful field of flowers
3 1 1 2 =7 syllables
up to you my nose
1 1 1 1 1 =5syllables
hope this will help you a lil. If you need any help P-mail me |
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