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Wind
Contributed by
suesan
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Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 08:30:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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It rustles though my hair
chills my skin so bare
it can be as genteel as a towel
but it may turn fierce and how
it moans and screams
rips wide meany seams
it sways spring flowers
nudges on summer towers
its an energy that never ends
its our beautiful
Wind
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suesan
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2005-06-09 20:30:24]
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Re: Wind
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 30th December 2005 @ 10:00:34 PM AEST
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| I love the wind. Mother Nature has an intense power. I liked your poem...you have a couple spelling errors, other than that, this was a nice read. Peace, Laura |
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Re: Wind
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by freckle on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 11:10:50 PM AEST
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I enjoyed your poem. Some of your rhymes seemed like you were trying too hard to find the right word...other parts flowed very well. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing!
Carol |
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Re: Wind
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 02:15:39 PM AEST
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hmm, i liked ur thinking. great expressions. great flow.
uve pictured the wind very well |
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