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Perfect Girl
Contributed by
skinney86
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Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 11:32:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I waited my whole life for you
Waited patiently to find you
I prayed for this perfect girl
This girl i thought i would never find
But i found that perfect girl
That perfect girl is you
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skinney86
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2005-06-09 23:32:13]
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Re: Perfect Girl
(User Rating: 1 )
by crystalfire on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 12:55:55 AM AEST
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| Wow, I'm amazed at the simplicity of this poem...so short and to the point, yet just as effective as a 300-page work of someone like Poe himself....I'm impressed! |
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Re: Perfect Girl
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by Mild_Tempest on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 12:50:25 AM AEST
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| Very good poem. I loved how it was so short but so effective. Keep writing |
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Re: Perfect Girl
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by EsotericWsdm4 on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 12:44:39 AM AEST
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| Lucky girl. |
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