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Lines and Spaces
Contributed by
xnoybis
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Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 01:13:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I keep hearing
Regrets
A ball I dropped
Management is waste
Clarity
You live and learn
Experience and evolve
Remember
Forgive but not forget
Always in school
Lessons
Apples glean nothing
Glances to others
Pointless
This is your bed
Sleeping while walking
Circles
Eyes with full bellies
Not sure what to do
Take A
Trip back inside
You are your Master
Tangent
Be strong in yourself
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xnoybis
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Re: Lines and Spaces
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 01:59:48 AM AEST
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wow.
Rather powerful.
Complete with interesting analogies.
Abstract.
Paradoxical.
Thought provoking.
Well done. |
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