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Contributed by
roisin
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Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 07:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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be still please - the voices are with me.....
rosie mac
will you once again
look through those rose-tinted glasses
with a blush on your cheek
a twinkle or tear in your eye
and laughter in your voice?
we know you've a gorgeous heart
that's been pierced
with nails of pain
pins of misery
and needles of despair
and you know ,rosie, as we
that life is a circle
and not a straight line
so begin your dance to freedom
the west is calling
your journey home has finally begun
Copyright ©
roisin
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2003-01-04 19:40:00]
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Re: No Title
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by nomad on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 07:46:17 AM AEST
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| Roisin, this is lovely. I love your style of writing and your vivid use of images. I don't mean to sound thick: Who is Rosie Mac? |
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by roisin on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 08:51:24 AM AEST
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| thick ,not at all...I am rosie mac |
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by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 01:48:09 PM AEST
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| ooh...this is lovely... |
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by thorns on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 03:37:15 PM AEST
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| nice contrast btwn the soft (light & roses) and the sharp (nails, pins, & needles). there is pain, and there is hope. |
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by Tanna on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 09:39:14 AM AEST
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| I like this one Rosie.... there's a lot of feelings of hopefulness in it. |
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