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Lazy Experiment
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 03:13:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Dont follow me
Stop where you are and turn around
Take a minute and understand
This road I travel
Is a journey unplanned
Spontantiously arrogant
Assertively on my own
I chased away the company
Now Im left to care
For myself
As of lately
Alone
Retract the story
Of my conquests and glory
For in gloating and hope
I am bound to plummet
Not for just for the fun of it
Sucker punched
In the gut
By the ghost
Who once was a poet
Relax your temperament
Dont be so hasty to criticize
This is a lazy experiment
The fossils
Have yet to even crystallize
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Copyright ©
jyssvw22
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2005-06-10 15:13:29]
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Re: Lazy Experiment
(User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 03:19:33 PM AEST
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This write is a bit angry and depressing Jyss...I'm sad to read this, but I don't believe all that negative stuff---You are a great person...Wonderful, caring...Very expressive write; well done.
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