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Untitled
Contributed by
dorkfish
on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 05:58:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Selfish Generosity
Unknowing Garelessness
Pretending
Yearning
Smirking
How is it unknown?
How is it not foreseen?
This is not new, it has been there
Wandering through the forests of anger
Swimming in the pool of greed
Never understanding the feelings, the acts
Never feeling the pain
Never feeling the need
Never understanding or succumbing to the wrong
How is it bearable?
How is it unnoticeable?
Always wanting more
No appreciation
No gratitude
Useless feelings and generosity
Wasted cares and tears
Fearing ramification
Fearing loneliness
loathing and loving
Taking and wanting
Ending and pretending
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dorkfish
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2005-06-10 17:58:00]
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Re: Untitled
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 04:19:21 PM AEST
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| Wow this was a strong, very good write, loved the words that you used throughout this poem. I liked how you ended it, it seemed to be the best part through it. SLipSiX. |
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