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One Friend
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 09:51:05 PM in AEST
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Out of many guy friends,
There is only one in the end
**** left me on my own
And ****** left me all alone
Those two, I trusted along with others
Who dont bother
To be my friend anymore
Im beginning to feel numb and sore
My one friend, I trust him
But I have been broken
By those who have lied
And didnt try
To help at all
As I called
They walked away
Now today
When the good one
Comes with arms
I duck past
And move quite fast
The others ruined me
Now you follow me,
Try to make me talk
You suggest a walk
But I turn from you
Others have been untrue
You could be, too
I know my life I have screwed
Please dont pull yourself in
My life is one great sin
All other friend have left
There is not proof that you wont theft
Me of my life also
Be like others and steal my soul
Friend, Ive been hurt way too much
Im someone not to trust
I love you like a bro
But you arent a pro
You cant fix me
You will see
Others have tried
Others have failed
And they left me in the rain
All to my pain
They left me, you will too
This is true
You will see
I decide you and me
Cant get too close or too tight
It is not right
If youll just break me like the others
Dont even bother,
My one friend,
This is my end
My way to say goodbye
My way to die
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Re: One Friend
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by freckle on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 09:56:47 PM AEST
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What a sad write. I hope you do let your friend in...sometimes, they can be better than all the riches in the world. I wish you true friendship and happiness!
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Re: One Friend
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by blue_angel on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 09:56:56 PM AEST
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oh sprints... this is sad... youre not going to die ok? guys are so stupid trust me i know. im not sure of exactly who you are talking about in this poem but even if he doesnt keep the frendship u still got us... me ok?
jennie* |
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Re: One Friend
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 04:29:28 PM AEST
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| This is a very sad, but a very emotional poem, your feelings really came out in it well, I liked the way you portrayed all of your words, it was very good. SLipSiX. |
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Re: One Friend
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by spazz911 on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 10:30:27 PM AEST
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dont cut urself off from other people cause it aint worth it
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