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Whatever!
Contributed by
MomentInTime
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Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 02:15:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
SongLyrics
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I give and take
I take and give,
whatever difference I do make
I make with them
I make with you,
with me I make when er I can;
I open doors
I open gates,
mayhaps I open some old sores
I grab the chance
I grab the want
my life I grab from the past tense.
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2005-06-11 02:15:24]
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Re: Whatever!
(User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 12:38:36 PM AEST
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*beat boxes along with Jordan's phat rhymes*
lmao I really liked this little write, but I'm afraid I don't hear it as a rap song...A little too tame!! Nicely done though...The last 6 lines especially.
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Re: Whatever!
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 01:05:02 AM AEST
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Jorden, I think this sounds good as a rap, all rap songs dont have to be ruff, unless of course you only listen to Tupuc. Ad this also sounds like your a gentlemen, there arent many of those left in the world! I Love it!!!
If ya get time you should listen to Puff Daddy, or P-Diddy, his song Best friends, one of my favorites.
Luv,
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Re: Whatever!
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 08:09:46 AM AEST
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nice job
very well expressed
keep writing i will be reading |
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