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Very Often
Contributed by
toserious2
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Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 11:42:07 AM in AEST
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dedicatedpoems
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like some terse lyric of a poet, Or curt imagery of a maiden sigh. A flash of euphoria, limiting the essence of being: speculation,laugh,sadness,dream.
Like a patting hand in blind darkness, or crunch of dried leaves under feet. A Glimmer of hope in human wit, In heart with positive wrath: Passion,spirit,cult ajar.
like the mania of a shepherd, or the haste of a youth. In bleak street of certainity Touched by blow of doubts: faith,silence,senseless gravity.
like metaphor of a thinker, or lover's dream in viewing. Sadness is the thing with its wings, fly day and night in full swing: pain,dryness, an abrasive ring.
This is me! A sum of whole Of feeligs.smooth but stirred, when gets,in your thought,lost: Now, it is your boat!!!!
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Re: Very Often
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 12:41:50 PM AEST (User
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Very well expressed---nice job!! It kind of reminded me of one of my writes. The imagery in this was excellent.
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Re: Very Often
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 03:58:49 AM AEST (User
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well, each verse is a pleasure to read, Im so glad I found them
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