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I'll dream till you return
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 12:29:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Far away from you
I'm still awaiting your call, your letter, something
But nothing comes
Offten I cry because
Not a word from you passes me by
Yet in my sleep I see you comming back
Your arms outstreatched
Waiting for me to jump in
In my dreams I see you never left
I know they are dreams
But they're all I have
So here in my room
I'll lay and dream
Till you return to me
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2005-06-11 12:29:11]
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Re: I'll dream till you return
(User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 12:50:16 PM AEST
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its a good write
and i feel the exact same way
difference is i believe that when dreams are all you have, then you have nothing and you need to start living instead of dreaming....
this is not a critique on your write, just my opinion
wake up and see what happens.....
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Re: I'll dream till you return
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by pollypocket on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 07:31:19 PM AEST
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| *sigh* I know I know. And as for my guy ... I'd wait forever if there was a possibility he would come back for me. But my guy doesn't know, I'm a wuss, I suck, yes indeed ... and that is life my friends. lol sorry 'bout that, but your poem reeks of amazingness ... so keep writing. |
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