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*~~~*If Only You Saw*~~~*
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 12:48:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm in love with you
But you don't even see me
Living a lie
Your passing me by
Not listening to me
Not even noticing
How...I...cry
I'm all alone
Away from home
Lost inside
All I do is hide
Wondering...how life passed me by
Far away
I try to run
But seeing you
I stop and wonder
What am I running from?
Living a lie
Your passing me by
Not listening to me
Not even noticing
How...I...cry
I'm all alone
Away from home
Lost inside
All I do is hide
Wondering...Why I even try
Lost....and dying inside
Holding.....on to you
I'm stuck in here
Wanting you to see
Who...I...am!
You're keeping me
You're entrancing me
But you don't see
ME!
Living a lie
Your passing me by
Not listening to me
Not even noticing
How...I...cry
I'm all alone
Away from home
Lost inside
All I do is hide
Wondering...Just wondering
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Re: *~~~*If Only You Saw*~~~*
(User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 01:22:02 PM AEST
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I dont write song lyrics or anything so I don't know how much help I'll be but I thought it was great! I'd love to hear it become a song. Great job.
--amanda-- |
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Re: *~~~*If Only You Saw*~~~*
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 06:44:18 PM AEST
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| i can imagine it sounding quite good. lots of people can probably relate which makes good song lyrics. |
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