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Unattractive Qualities
Contributed by
spazz911
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Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 07:01:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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am i just plain unattractive?
I want to know the truth
I just plain want to know
whats not wrong with you
Obviously something about me
makes them run and hide
I do okay at first
but they run if your near by
this isn't what it sounds like
they dont run away from you
more like running towards you
leaving me aloof
Is it that your prettier?
because of course its true
but i thought we needed more than
beauty, fake and true
could it be my habbits?
are they unattractive too?
my obbsessive and compulsive
drive them me to you
or were there never mes?
and only always yous?
because my unattractive qualities
have sent them to you like glue
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spazz911
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2005-06-11 19:01:13]
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Re: Unattractive Qualities
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 09:24:39 PM AEST
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good write kc. and why the hell don't i know what this damn fight was about?!?! some triangle the three of us form. and you don't have unattractive qualities, kc. just all the guys in our school are damn idiots. except when it comes to liking me... cause there you can't point out one that likes me! guys are idiots, kc, it's the truth. (sry if any guy out there reads this). and you can talk to me, kc, you really can. oh and there are guys that like/ed you. and the old ones didn't run away, they just moved on... like you, jennie and i move on. trust me, kc, you'll find someone who likes you for you someday. keep up the good work!
your BFF,
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Re: Unattractive Qualities
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 05:06:17 PM AEST
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beautiful, everybody can feel like this at times...great poem
- Beth - |
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Re: Unattractive Qualities
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by poetryfreak13 on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 04:23:12 PM AEST
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| This reminds me of something that happened 2 me. good work. |
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