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Still...
Contributed by
daniella
on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 07:52:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Still
And on the edge of this I stand
A white tear resting in the palm of my hand
And a reflection of each year
Rippling in my eyes
Still
Breathless and gone
Again
And inside this blue, soft night I reside
As those gems continue to shine
Deep
Holding your heartyou stumble
Blood rimmed roses encircling my lips
Pay no attention
This could be
Fading
I think I may have something more to cry
Something more
To dream
I can feel myself
Warmer
I can feel myself
Behind your eyes
Breathless and lost
Submission in those stars
And Torn
Glowing bright with silver artisans
Falling swiftly from the sky
Upon the door
Knockingknocking
Oh! Its Winter. Hello.
Breathless and cold
Still
Inside
And the pale serenity of her pulsing, beating frame
Fading into us
My Heart
Shes melting into glass
Breathless and calm
And beneath your skin I could feel my fingertips
Feel them
Touch
Under your Faith
Us
Painting Blue
But still
Theres something
And close your eyes
Into you
And its strange I never knew
Only
Stillness
Copyright ©
daniella
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2005-06-11 19:52:32]
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Re: Still...
(User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 07:46:39 PM AEST
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Wow, this is really good... I'm surprised it's a month old and no one has commented.
Keep it up! |
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Re: Still...
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by zenith66 on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 04:46:34 PM AEST
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| I no wat u mean, im not saying im brilliant but id like some feedback on my poetry you know, ive been here 5 months and only gotten a few, any way sorry this is a wonderfull write, so deep and brilliantly abstract...Great job!! |
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