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Embrace
Contributed by
sinned
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Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 08:40:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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If I can dream each day with or about you
I would hope you wouldn't mind
Love is more than bliss
Love is together in happiness
Skies are not forever blue
I like the holding of your hand
Small talk and important things
Whenever we have to say goodbye
I lose a breath with a sigh
You hold my heart by no command
Love is given back and forth
Strings unattached
If I happen to see you from a distance
My heart flutters that same instant
You are mine and I yours
You make me happy and my happiness I want to be yours
I despise it when we have to be apart
Then when I see you I tend to race
I love you and want your embrace
I could cuddle you for hours
I just feel so inclined
To hold you wanting nothing
The warmness of your undeserving love
Blue skies are forever above
Woman I love you rain or shine
Sinned
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Re: Embrace
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 12:42:38 AM AEST
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I really loved this write becuase it shows true love and dedication. It shows the meanings of love and the things love can do to a person, how it can make us think. "How close it comes to perfect, words will never understand, you and your love made me want to be a better man". Im a sucker for love writes becuase i take love very serious. Liking some one is admiring their good things loving some one is loving their faults and weaknesses along with the good things. Truely a great write i loved it.
keep writing
keep smiling
keep loving
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Re: Embrace
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by springchic1979 on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 09:27:44 PM AEST
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This was beautiful . Very warm and loving. Excellent!
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Re: Embrace
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 12:23:39 PM AEST
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Beautiful Dennis.
You highlight the gratuitiousness of true love.
It's there. - faithful to the end. - and all "gratuitious"
Thanks for sharihng these beautiful lines with us.
Hugs
Elizabeth
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